She’s Finally Here!
2 things I did well: It is was easy to read and organized. It was also a good and thoughtful story. 2 things I need to work on: not repeating myself too much and using more concise and advanced language/vocab.
Month: April 2019
Disobeying Unjust Laws is Crucial
2 things I did well: My essay was organized and easy to follow. I also provided strong arguments to support my opinion. 2 things I could improve on: Add a little more insight and further develop my ideas for clarity and insight. Work on improving my transitions and using stronger topic sentences.