2 things done well:
I believe with the synthesis essay that I had completed the conclusion very well to show an ending that not only summarized what was discussed but also shows a powerful final statement.
I also believe that I put many good details, evidence, and reasoning into my essay in order to show more detail into the topic I am trying to portrait.
2 things to improve on:
One thing that I felt I could improve on is that with my details and evidence I believe that I could have put more explanation into the essay in order to further develop the reader’s attention and also make it easier for them to understand.
I also believe that I need to try and get better at writing a better hook in order to get the reader interested in the essay as soon as they pick it up.
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