Two things I did well:

• Firstly, I believe that I had good information to my topic that helped my topic.
• Secondly, I believe that I wrote in good detail about each point helping with showing my facts.

Two things I did not do well:

• Firstly I believe my wording in some cases were not very well chosen because it made some sentences sound weird and in some cases not understand.
• Secondly, I wish that in some cases I put fewer words into an explanation because in some cases my explanations are condensed and in others, the explanation is very long.

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