Essay #2 Thesis

Although, the Rebellion of 1837, American Civil War, and the situation in Canada prior to Confederation, were before John A MacDonald’s decision; it was not completely in the name of Canada’s union.

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  1. I think it could be simpler.

    Maybe something like: “The union of Canada (or you could say “Confederation” instead) was not a completely logical conclusion when examining the Rebellion of 1837, the American Civil War and the situation in Canada in the 1860s.”

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