“Tell Tale Heart” -alternate ending in new point of view – Luka Mladenovic

The point of view I used is

from the police officer (Limited omniscient)

Walking into the house was very pleasant. His smile stressed across his face in delight as if we were tourists from another country. He lead us into the house and we let him know we were here because there were complaints of screaming next door. He seemed especially energetic at this time of the morning. he took us through the house standing with a straight posture and an energetic vibe. There was no way there was something bad going on, he seemed harmless and we didn’t even bother inspecting much of the house. He brought us to his bedroom where he placed a seat for himself and for us as well. “What a well mannered man!” all of us exclaimed. He brought us some tea and us officers had a great time laughing and having fun drinking our tea. I glanced back at him only to see him sweating and fidgeting all around. he seemed in stress and suddenly jumped to his feet with his arms flexing and face red screaming “Vilans! Dissemble no more! I admit the deed! Tear up the planks! Here, Here! It is the beating of his hideous heart!” We got up and saw what we would never imagine.

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