How humans overcome the hardship in life

Reflection:

2 things I want to improve:

  1. Some paragraphs would be organized better,
  2. More background in the intro part.

2 things I did well:

  1. I use a lot of transition word and effect into the essay.
  2. Quotes are integrated seamlessly.

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