Our project was to create a blackout poem inspired by a short story called the veldt. My poem called The improvement explores many of the same aspects of the veldt.
Powtoon Found Poem- The Improvement.
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Thank you for submitting your PowToon Poetry project on your Edublog for both COL and English 9. I have the following observations:
– Blackout poem process is highlighted in the video, your found poem is aesthetically pleasing
– Properly uses the technology to create a presentation in video format
– Video is fairly well edited and smooth to watch, make sure you spell words like poem properly as it takes away from the presentation
– Capitalize sentences and make sure that you capitalize proper nouns (names of people, companies, official locations, etc.) > Ray Bradbury >>> not doing this takes away from your final product
– Reflection somewhat limited and provides some context to process taken to complete project
– Properly embedded both the video and document on the edublog post
Well done on this assignment!
Mr. Barazzuol
COL Teacher