I am proud of my seamlessly integrated quotes that helped me support my evidence I am proud of the strong details and reasons I had in my essay that show insight. I could improve on having clearer introduction and a more insightful “so what”. I could also improve on my conclusion with a more powerful […]
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Synthesis Essay
Two things I did well: My hook has hooked the reader and my background information was interesting and relevant. I also provided good details and examples that supported the thesis. Two things I could improve for next time: My sentences could be more varied and complex where I could also make fewer errors in grammar […]