2 Things I did well: I showed my story, not tell. I had varied sentence fluency. 2 Things I can improve: The story needs to be more clear. Add more detail so the pacing is ideal.
Tag: NarrativeA
A Colossal Visit From a “Tiny” Colony
What did I do well?: I did well on using a variety of different sentences in my essay and including short sentences. What can I improve on for next time?: For next time, I could keep my writing more concise and to not ‘over describe’ things that are unnecessary.