My poem is about love

Oh the sun is shiny like you

You’re my next station

I fell good when I stay with you

You make my heart stop

You’re my new way to go.

You’re insecure

You’re turning head when you walk through the door

And you’ll meet a good person who take careful you like as a queen

We’ll stay until we die

I promise I won’t let you go

I’ll take you to travel around the moon

To look for our future

I’d take a million pictures and save them just for me and you

When we get old

We will show our story to kids

• your inspiration/motivation my inspiration is when you see girls that you like you miggt want to say poem to that girl

• your theme my poem theme is about love

• rhyme scheme no I didn’t use

• why you used rhyme or not yes I use the rhyme for make poem look
• identify the 3 examples of poetic devices used 1 travel around the moon simile 2 picture simile. 3 my heart stop simile.
• anything else you believe that’s important to explain  I compared two thing together