Descriptive Writing Lesson #3

Feb. 3

Task #1 – Go over Adjective Word Bank

Task #2 – Write a short story about one of the images below as the inspiration for your story.  Please give your story a title and be as descriptive as possible.  Your draft will be due for tomorrow’s class.  Please make sure it is done to the best of your ability as it will be edited in class tomorrow.  Have fun!

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Posting Comments and Adjectives Practice

Feb. 2

Task #1 – We’re going to practice commenting on the blog today by having each of you post an example of the simple sentences you transformed.

** Remember, this is a public document so everyone can see what you are posting.  Select your best example.

Follow the steps below but use today’s example not the lesson below:

15-09-2015 8-44-29 AM

15-09-2015 8-53-36 AM

** Edit the rest of your sentences **

Task #2 – Go to noredink.com and sign up for an account.  If you already have an account, update your profile and make sure you log in with the class code – aeef4ck4

Task #3 – Go over adjective lesson and adjective vocab.  Students will need to complete Using Adjectives Practice #1 noredink.com following the lesson

Descriptive Writing Lesson #2

Feb. 1

Task #1 – Take turns reading your descriptive examples from Friday’s work to a partner in and try to guess what each of you are trying to describe. Please do this with two different partners.

Task #2 – Transforming the following simple sentences

Example:

He walked the dog.

On Sunday morning, Steve happily walked his tiny black poodle through Stanley park with girlfriend while enjoying their Starbucks coffee they bought on Granville Street before they set out on their perfect Autumn date together.

Transform the following sentences:

  1. She played soccer
  2. He liked her
  3. The food was good
  4. I like/hate math
  5. He loves basketball
  6. She was happy
  7. I love the rain
  8. Summer is my favourite

 

Attached are two word banks that will be of use to you:

Adjective Word Bank

Sensory Words

 

Descriptive Writing #1

Jan. 29

What Am I?

Your task is to be as descriptive as possible to describe 3 different things (person, place, object, scene, scenario, ect.) without directly stating what it is.  Your detailed description should allow the reader to know what it is you are writing about.

Example:

The bright ball blinds you as it emerges; it rises like a yellow lollipop on the distant horizon.  Crashing against the shore, small waves wash the night’s debris onto the land.  Untouched golden sand covers the floor as far as your eyes can see.  Soothing, a gentle sea breeze rustles through your hair.

Welcome to EAL Skills!

Jan. 29

Instructor: Mr. Thies

Room: Room 127

Email: jthies@sd43.bc.ca

Course Overview

EAL Skills is a non-credit course that will build upon the skills and concepts covered in EAL Intermediate.  Students will continue to develop their skills in reading comprehension, as well as written and oral fluency in order to increase their English proficiency. This course enables students to explore literature and to use language with confidence through exploration and practice in reading, writing, speaking, listening and cooperative learning.

 

This course is designed for the student who:

  • has limited English skills (approximately level 3+)
  • understands and can participate in simple oral conversation
  • understands and uses more complex language structure (although not yet mastered)
  • is expanding vocabulary base to include more academic vocabulary
  • is developing strategies to aid comprehension
  • is able to read independently and respond to material

 

Classroom Philosophy & Expectations

EAL Skills will require effort and discipline on the part of the student.  It is essential that students are capable of working both independently as well as in group activities.  It is crucial that all students participate every class and review the day’s lessons each night.

Students will be taught how to navigate their teacher’s blog as well as how effectively use their edublog which is where the majority of their assessed work will be submitted.  Students will be given ample time to complete the work assigned during class time.  If students consistently have to complete their work at home, it is because they are not effectively using their class time.

Lessons, assignments, and projects are designed to meet the learning outcomes for the course.  Therefore, it is a must that students do not miss class and arrive to class on time.  Students are not to be late.  Assignments and tests that are not completed will result in a mark of “zero” until they are completed.  Late assignments/projects will be accepted; however they will only be given a maximum mark of 50% unless the students have been granted an extension.  Extensions will be granted so long as students use their class time wisely, provide an adequate reason for their need for an extension, and ask well before the due date.

Put your best effort into each class and BE RESPECTFUL…to yourself, your peers, your classroom, your teacher.

 

Course Materials

Students will need to bring a device (tablet or lap top) as well as a pen or pencil every class

 

Course Evaluation

  • Grammar                                                 10%
  • Oral/Participation                                 20%
  • Written                                                     40%
  • Comprehension                                      30%

Students will be able to access their marks through the following website: www.engrade.com.  Please use this resource to keep track of your marks and any missing assignments. You will be given an access code early in the course.  You will only be able to see your own information and your information will be secure from other viewers.

 

PLAGARISM AND CHEATING

Don’t do it!  The problem will be referred to administration.

 

COURSE CONTENT

We will be covering the following units

  • Descriptive & Creative Writing
  • Grammar
  • Short Stories
  • Poetry
  • Novel Study

 

A FINAL NOTE

If any student requires additional help I am available before school and can be found in my classroom.   I firmly believe that each and every student should have every opportunity to do well.  If you have any concerns or comments please contact me immediately.

 

Regards,

Mr. J Thies

 

 

Poem Revisions & Intro to Lit Circles

Dec. 8

Task #1 – Review your poems and make sure you have them posted and have included the analysis.  When you post them make sure that you tag them appropriately.  We will use #SkillsPoems.  (I will show you how to tag your posts.)

Task #2 – Go over Lit Circle Roles.  You will need these for our novel study.  You will only be using one at a time but please download the following: Connector (fillable) Discussion Director (fillable) Illustrator (fillable) Word Wizard (fillable) Travel Tracer (fillable) Summarizer (fillable) Researcher (fillable) Literary Luminary (fillable)

Task #3 – You may borrow a hard copy of the book (which you will need to sign out) or use the digital copy here: Touching Spirit Bear NOVEL

Book Sign Out

Short Story Final pt. 5

Nov. 10

You should have the following completed for the short story you selected:

  • Filled out and submitted the google doc
  • Completed plot diagram
  • Completed Character Traits worksheet
  • Completed summary
  • Completed paragraph response

** Each of these should be attached as files under a heading **

The last part of this project will be the posting of your project on your blog and the oral presentation.  Be prepared to discuss the following types of questions:

  • Why did you select the story?
  • Describe your favourite/least favourite character.
  • If you could change the ending how would you change i?
  • Would you read another story by this author?
  • What was the setting, conflict, etc.?
  • Why would you/wouldn’t you recommend this story to one of your classmates?

 

Short Story Final pt. 4

Nov. 9

You should have the following completed for the short story you selected:

  • Filled out and submitted the google doc
  • Completed plot diagram
  • Completed Character Traits worksheet
  • Completed summary

Please write a paragraph response for your selected short story.  It should only be one paragraph long.  Please remember the following when writing your response:

  • it should have a clear topic sentence, body, and concluding sentence
  • it should clearly express your opinion and not summarize the story
  • Do not use “I think” “I believe” “I like”
  • make sure include the name of the story in your topic sentence

** feel free to check with me about the topic you want to write on **

Short Story Final pt.3

Nov. 5

You should have the following completed for the short story you selected:

  • Filled out and submitted the google doc
  • Completed plot diagram
  • Completed Character Traits worksheet

Please write a concise summary of your selected short story.  It should only be one paragraph long.  Please remember the following when writing your summary:

  • it should be a brief retelling of the story that highlights the main points written in your own words
  • it should be written in the past tense
  • it should not express your opinion