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Oct. 14

Skills Students will be writing a comprehension test.

Composition Students will be doing the following:

Task #1 – Make sure that you post your response to the question from yesterday’s class.

Task #2 – Look at two other students’ responses and post a response of your own.  Your response should facilitate a response or a discussion.

 

Completing Your Paragraph

Oct. 8

You have the class to complete your paragraph.  Below is the example I showed in class yesterday from the short story “Keesh.”

Example Paragraph

          Keesh was the best hunter in the village.  For example, he demonstrated all of the characteristics a good hunter should possess: bravery, selflessness, and skill.  Keesh showed how skilled he was because every time he left for a hunt he returned home with meat for village.  Furthermore, he discovered a way to kill bears using his mind rather simply trying to over-power them as the other hunters did.  This was important because Keesh was only thirteen and as the story states, “Boys of his age did not go out to hunt, and they certainly never went out to hunt alone.”  This shows how brave Keesh was.  Keesh was even willing to hunt a mother bear and her cubs which is extremely dangerous because of how aggressive mother bears are.  Even though other animals would have been safer and maybe easier to hunt, Keesh courageously hunted bears because they provided the most meat.  This was important because he wanted to make sure that his village had enough food.  This showed that he was not hunting to prove how brave he was but rather he hunted to ensure his people did not starve.  Being selfless allowed Keesh to be a better hunter than anyone else because he did not need to prove anything, rather he was hunting to survive.  The combination of Keesh’s bravery, selflessness, and skill made him the best hunter in the village.

 

 

Grammar Quiz & Character Sketch

October 6

Task#1 – Go to Noredink.com and complete your grammar quiz

Task #2 – Read over “The Stolen Letter” and collect evidence about one of the main characters (Narrator, Dupin, Chief) for your character sketch.  Your job will be to be as descriptive as possible using the information you learn about the character from the story.  Think of what we talked about regarding the chief in last day’s class.  Look at  Character Traits Word Bank for a list of character traits.  You will need as much information as possible for tomorrow’s writing activity so you will need to do a good job.

Grammar Quiz & Paragraph #1

October 6

Task #1 – Go to Noredink.com and complete your grammar quiz

Task #2 – Complete your draft of your “Sanctuary” paragraph.

  • Be sure you have clearly included each section (topic sentence, supporting points, conclusion).
  • Make sure you include direct evidence from the story.
  • Ensure that you have clearly answered the question, “Does the Sanctuary have a happy or sad ending?”