The Architect
The exhausted Architect
finishes his day’s work
A step back to admire
observe his model
With a thunderous Swoosh
his blood turns to cement
heart and brain to glass
and flesh to brick
HOUSE…
Mini-composition
January
R.S. Thomas’ “January” is a closed poem in which the poet gives the reader a view of what happens to the fox during a fox hunt. In the poem a badly hurt fox drags itself through the snow with its stomach dragging. “Over the, snow crimson seeds” the crimson seeds are drops of blood and crimson is very dark red. “Blood burst with a mild explosion” this means that the blood is squirting out of the fox’s stomach. “Whose white hands can give no healing” this is a personification of snow which is the hands referred to in the quote. R.S. Thomas’ “January” shows the reader the suffering of a fox during a fox hunt.
Jonas – clever poem, but you do have ‘turns into…’ in it. Where is the symbolic imagery for your poem? Decent composition overall… a bit short though.