English 10 Synthesis Essay – “What effects does racism have on a person?”

I was very happy with my mark on my synthesis essay, and two things that I did very well was integrating quotes properly, and writing a good conclusion that makes the reader continue thinking after finishing reading my essay.

On future essays, I would like to improve on my intro sentence, and make sure to integrate my essay topic sentence in a way that intrigues the reader when starting to read my essay.