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Open in new tab 2 things I did well
– I think that my essay was easy to read and understand.
– I tried to used sentences that hook the reader at the beginning of each paragraph
2 things I could have do better
– I could have used more transition words and done better corrections.
– I have to make sure I stay on topic with the question that I focusing on and make sure that I dont stray away and get distracted.