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I feel I could have told a story that was more unique to me. Even if the experiences I had were different than those of others, I feel my examples of life in high school were somewhat generic and a story from another point in my life could have painted a better picture. I also feel that I could have worked with the material better. Had I spent more time working on clever sentences and remarks about my unique experiences I could have presented a more interesting and entertaining essay.
I did a good job at portraying a clear and interesting perspective throughout my essay. I also feel that my writing was clear and had a clear progression from point to point which created an enjoyable essay to read.