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I am proud of how I grew my understanding of these topics to expand on them in my essay. Before beginning this essay, I wasn’t very familiar with how it might feel to be a part of the LGBTQ community in America. After 
completing this I have a different understanding of these problems.
I am also proud of my writing, I think at this point in my high school career I’ve become pretty effective at the writing itself, even if the content could be improved.
I could have improved on my analysis of the material. I could have gone deeper into the imagery and expanded more than I did, which would have resulted in a more effective essay.
I also could have improved on my insightfulness. If I had spent a little more time working on this, I could have added more to the conversation and improved both my understanding and the reader’s.