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(Civil Disobedience – NAACP March advocating civil rights for African Americans)
Overall I enjoyed writing this essay. Researching and gathering sources could be a challenge, but putting the evidence together into an essay was a satisfying writing experience for me.
I implemented a variety of sources into my essay to both expand my points and back them up. I tried to balance real life events as well as research to back up my point more convincingly. I also used transitions between paragraphs well which created a nice flow between my points.
I could have improved on my conclusion, I believe I could have wrapped up my essay in a way that touched on more of my points and concluded them more effectively. I also could have put more effort into the events/protests that I chose. They illustrated my point well but I feel if I had devoted more time to research them I could manage to find more fitting protests.