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Two things I could improve on would be to make separate paragraphs and work on my conflict.
Two things I did well on was expressing my emotions and using rhyme in the beginning.

Poetic devices

(“Click, Click, Click”) (onomatopoeia)

(“Little did I know the answer was near: it was right in the clear”) (rhyme)

(“Her bow: bluer and purer than a mountain, cold, heartless,” (personification)

(“One stormy dark night as the moon shines bright”(imagery)

(“Respectively, bottom. middle, and top”) (Rule of 3)