Fractured poetry BKC

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”there was this beautiful glass bridge in the sky”

”I went on vacation to China this summer to visit family and friends. I also went sightseeing. I went to tour the birthplace of my parents”

experience, heaven and beautiful

i chose these  words because they sum up the whole story and they are powerful as u can feel what the story is about. the vacation i went on were an experience, it was heaven and it was beautiful. This tells me that you don’t need a lot of words or a long story to tell a good poem. I learned that a short sentence or a couple of words can be as good as a phrase

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it was like heaven

experience gratefulness

beautiful pleasure

 

 

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