Persuasive Essay Reflection

1 thing im proud of.

•  In this persuasive essay I’m proud that I got it done on time and that the format was right for it

2 Things I want to improve

• I would do more research so I would have more information to go off of and make my persuasive essay more persuasive and more understandable.
• I would also pick a rounder topic that has more evidence to back it up with.

I chose this photo because it shows a leader above everyone else which is what I’m arguing .