Two things I am proud of:
I am proud that I was able to create a true short story about my life and make it interesting. I am also proud of my writing skills and how I was able to create a good hook and climax. I was proud of how I incorporated the dialogue.
Two things I want to improve on for next time:
Make a more engaging title. To make sure that the purpose is the main objective throughout and to not have needless parts of the story. Work on word variety.
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