Persuasive Essay (corrected)-28lug4n
Two things I did well in this essay:
- Transitioning between topics
- Using evidence to dig deep and provide an in-depth perspective on my topic
Two things I can improve for next time:
- Avoiding informal terms (writing “it is” instead of “it’s”)
- Reviewing my essay more before I hand it in. There were probably a few sentences that could have been joined with colons or semi-colons, and the few errors I made could have been avoided had I reread the essay.
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Martin Luther King Jr., one of the biggest and most famous advocates of civil disobedience