Alex Pao’s poem, A Man’s travels, is inspired by A Mountain Journey and explores the struggles of Winter; it was found on page 111 and 112 of Lost in the Barrens by Farley Mowat. The poem reveals how hard winter can be and the struggles of living through it.
Alex – while interesting, I found your poem a bit too literal. With this topic, you needed to explore the theme of hubris a bit more. Enjoy your summer.