Thank you for posting your practice/attempt of turning a short story into a newspaper article. The following are my suggestions based on your post:
– Headline and byline are completed properly
– The lead paragraph answers most of the relevant questions with appropriate information
– Explanation and additional information could have included further work and details, as it is does not fully meet the expectations of these sections within a newspaper article (lacking content)
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask!
thats really good! your put and instead of an by the way, so you might want to fix it:)
Thank you for posting your practice/attempt of turning a short story into a newspaper article. The following are my suggestions based on your post:
– Headline and byline are completed properly
– The lead paragraph answers most of the relevant questions with appropriate information
– Explanation and additional information could have included further work and details, as it is does not fully meet the expectations of these sections within a newspaper article (lacking content)
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask!
Mr. Barazzuol
English Teacher