Opinion Piece Corrections

  Definitely, maybe. Should sports teams be allowed to use First Nations’ logo or mascots? To what extent would it become offensive? Formally, the hockey team ‘Blackhawks’, originally got their name and logo from the owner Frederic McLaughlin…. Read More

Narrative Essay Corrections

I believe that I did well in being desriptive and showing instead of telling. However, I really need to improve on making better and stronger structured sentences and being fluent with them.  

Persuasive Essay (Corrections)

I would improve on planning my essay outline making my arguments stronger and more consistent also and support my thesis better.I would say that my essay is well organized with complete sentences and easy to decipher.  

3 “LORD OF THE FLIES” CHARACTERS AS CHARACTERS FROM “THE LITTLE MERMAID”

What it means to be human..

Humans need to be able to communicate Humans need to interact with each others Humans look for happiness Humans want to express their feelings Humans like to help others in need Humans like to communicate in order to… Read More

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