Forgiving the hardship and trauma of the residential schools

Reflection:

I believe within this Compare and Contrast essay I was able to integrate transition words almost seamlessly in my paragraphs while still using them sparingly. Also while not bogging up the essay with pretentious language I was able to use a strong vocabulary to augment my arguments in an unobtrusive way.

My paragraphs don’t flow from one to another in a natural way from sentence to sentence and the organization was lacking in parts of the essay. All in all, they don’t account for the overall experience and feel cobbled together to create a somewhat connected conclusion. As well as a better use of quotes to help my point reach the reader better.