Name:  Sydney           Date:  January 29 2020

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Introduction

Hook:  write a catchy phrase

Do you ever question things bigger than life or what you could do in different situations?

Background Information: Give some background info about the topic.  Can you link to a core competency here?

I think that Beth (my partner) really used the communication core competency really well. She communicated her ideas in a way that made sense to me.

Topic Sentence: This is the main idea of your entire paragraph.  What will your paragraph prove: Make active voice.

I think that Beth had really thoughtful ideas when we asked the question, “What superpower would you want?”

Supporting Details:  Give examples, support to prove your topic sentence

–       She told me that she wanted to have the power to duplicate items, which could better the world.

–       She explained that she would use her superpower to duplicate wind turbines to create clean energy and would duplicate food in majority world countries. Her ideas were really interesting and really would be helpful to the entire world if she actually had that superpower.

Closing Sentence: Sum up and state how you have proven your topic sentence

–       I think that Beth was very creative and had some really amazing answers to this question that made we want to reflect more about my own answers.

 

 

My paragraph:

Do you ever question what you would do in different situations? I think that Beth, my partner, had really thoughtful ideas when we got asked the question, “What superpower would you want to have?” She told me that she would want to have the power to duplicate anything. She said that a superpower like that could change the world for the better. She explained that she would use her superpower to duplicate wind turbines to create clean energy or would duplicate food and water in countries where those are needed. Her answers were really interesting and really would definitely be helpful if she had that superpower in real life. I think that Beth used the core competency for communication really well when we answered these questions. She was able to explain her ideas efficiently and in a way that was easy for me to understand. I think that Beth was very creative and had some really amazing answers to these questions that made me want to reflect more about my own answers.

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