Tuesday- Commas, Peer Edit, Revisions

  1. Do the corrections: Good and bad sentences for Food and YOu-
  2. Exchange your computer with a partner. Peer edit by following the checklist. Be sure to check it off if you read it and it makes sense. Peer editing checklist for Food and You-
  3. Look at the rubric. How will it be assessed?
  4. Do the revisions for your paragraph. Do your best to include level 2 adjectives and descriptions; watch your comma usage; make sure it reflects YOU! Check mine out again- I’m pretty proud of it 🙂 Food Critic- Bin 941-
  5. Have the printed copy WITH AN IMAGE for me tomorrow.