Monthly Archives: April 2018
Spoken Word
What to improve:
I think that we could have added more imagery to make it even more powerful and we could have rehearsed more together to have a better presentation.
What I did well:
We collaborated really well together to create something that I am really proud of. We chose a topic that we thought was very relevent and important right now. I also think that we did a good job presenting it in front of the class.
Narrative Essay
What to improve:
I need to make sure that I cut any unnecessary words and deadwood. To make my writing more concise. I could also have included more voice to provide more insight.
What I did well:
I had few grammatical errors and I provided good imagery with descriptive writing.