Narrative Essay

Narrative Essay

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While doing my narrative essay, two things I was able to achieve was being able to show the story by using imagery instead of telling. I was also able to create a story that was well structured, having a beginning, body and end.

Two things that I would like to improve on is using more transition words to be able to make the story flow better. Another thing I would to improve is cutting out words that are not necessary and replacing them with better uses of words.  I would also like to improve my awkwardness shown through some of my sentences.

Narrative Essay – Shannon Ford-1wxnaot

 

“The Watch” by Elie Wiesel

As I walked into the room, the first thing I noticed was the scent. The smell of urine mixed with dead bodies, lack of hygiene and sweat filled my nose. As I entered, I noticed bodies lying on weak and uncomfortable looking bunk beds made of wood, for about five to six people to share. They looked like a pile of bodies stacked together crammed into one room. Their pillows were metal bowls, with only their clothing keeping them warm. I could see their bones peaking through their skin and suffering in their eyes. I could imagine the people begging for food as starvation took over their bodies. I felt hurt, about those who have lost their lives living in a place like this. This uncomfortable room being placed with other people like a prisoner with no water, food, or proper clothes and beds. The sound of creeks as they took a step on the old wooden floor and the feeling of warmth soon came from the bodies that filled the room. I can only hope that this photo I took will spread a message about these innocent lives who have suffered in this horrific room.

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Compare and Contrast Essay

Compare and Contrast Essay

To start off, one thing that I have done well in my essay was being able to use strong evidences to back up my thesis. I was also able to create a hook that would grab the reader right away as well as keeping my arguments organized in a logical order.

Two things that I would like to improve is my word choices. Most of the time, I would include words that are not necessary or that could be worded better. Another thing I would like to improve is my quote integration. Finding more quotes that would better suit the thesis, as well as making sure to avoid mistakes through the integration of the quotes.

Overall, I found this essay helpful to learn how to take points from different sources and comparing them, as well as learning how to integrate quotes with my arguments to support the thesis. In addition, creating the planning sheet before starting the essay has taught me how to organize my ideas so that I could see it more clearly.

Compare and Contrast Essay – Shannon-ow2asx

 

Three Reasons Why Atticus Finch Is Unhuman

Three Reasons Why Atticus Finch is Unhuman 

We all know Atticus Finch as a sincere, intelligent father who is willing to do anything to protect his children. He is your every day single dad and a hard working lawyer. A well mannered man living in Maycomb who treats everyone with respect, and always sees the positive side of everything. Atticus seems to come across as the perfect gentleman, and father, but under all that, is he really human?

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1. He has laser eyes.

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Just like superman when he is shooting lasers with his eyes, he somehow can see clearly where he is aiming. When Atticus drops his glasses, trying to aim for the rabid dog with his gun, he makes a perfect shot on his first try. How is that even possible??? He hasn’t been shooting for years ever since he had his children and now suddenly, he is still good at shooting? Wouldn’t he have lost some of his skills?

Even people who have been training to shoot tin cans from miles away for all their life will have trouble shooting a moving dog, with blurry vision. If Atticus dropped his glasses, wouldn’t he be seeing double? How does he make out the image? How does he aim the dog on his first try after so many years with no practice? For normal people, after not using a gun for years will probably be hard to even remember how to shoot one! They would probably get startled by the loud gunshot and fall shooting in another direction. This is just unhuman!

2. He is always composed.

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How on earth can someone be so relaxed and composed all the time, even on crazy situations? Him being a single father and being a lawyer can be stressful. No parent or child could ever do that. If he was human, he would’ve yelled at his children for making a game about another neighbour and trying to get their attention yet he pretends he doesn’t know.

When Aunt Alexandra criticised the way Scout was dressed, Atticus didn’t get upset or offended. Even when a nasty, mean, old lady spits nasty comments about him and his children, he replies with a compliment. If I were him, I would’ve smacked that woman and yelled back at her face. Yet Atticus composes himself as if it was nothing. How!? It’s impossible for someone to never get mad, it just isn’t! It’s a human emotion that you can’t control. Then here is Atticus who always sees the bright side of everyone and everything, and respects everyone equally, even though they treat him back like garbage.

3. He is wise

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Atticus is like an owl. Not only does he have lots of knowledge, but he is someone who makes smart decisions that no one would even consider. He doesn’t allow other comments of others influence his perspective and somehow replies with these genius comments that tips everyone off their feet.

Just like during the trial, everyone is so convinced that it was Tom Robinson who raped Mayella, yet Atticus comes back shooting smart comments that no one else would think of. His questions are quite different such as asking was there a doctor called. You wouldn’t get it the first time why he would ask such a question, but Atticus would soon blow your mind once you followed along. His facts and reasons are all well showed which tricks everyone’s minds.

All his morals always sound like it came out of a quote book, but it’s said by him in his own words, a new moral in almost every single chapter, with deep meanings. How can someone come up with these knowledgeable statements teaching everyone valuable lessons on the spot? This is impossible!

Food and You Descriptive Essay

Visit to Great Pallas Athena: Greatest Greek Restaurant in Town

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Pallas Athena, a delicious, warm felt home Greek restaurant for family and friends, located in Port Coquitlam, British Columbia, which my family and I frequently visit, due to the countless variety of incredible Greek meals. As we enter the restaurant, the smell of light, flaky marinated calamari and baked pita smothered with butter filled my nose. We are greeted by a friendly hostess who shows us to our table. As I look around while walking towards our table, I notice a striking white statue in the centre of the room, posing in a beautifully undefinable way. I take my seat, noticing the heavy metal chairs that screech against the hard wood floor as I begin to pull. While looking at the menu, a bubbly waitress comes to serve us. The item on the menu that catches my eye is arni psito, one of their signature dishes. This meal includes a perfectly well seasoned, slow roasted New Zealand lamb shoulder, filled with heavenly pockets of juicy tender meat. It is served with a Greek salad, lemon roasted potato, rice pilaf, and sautéed vegetables. While waiting for our meal, the waitress brings a basket of freshly sliced baked pita bread and tzatziki. My meal comes just in time as my stomach starts to grumble. Not only does it smell heavenly, but the light soothing Greek music playing gives me the relaxing feeling of being in Greece. The music is mixed with sounds of beautiful piano notes and a touch of the violin, giving the room a Greece vibe. As I take my first bite, I can taste the richness and tenderness of the lamb mixed with a crunch of the buttered pita bread absorbed in my mouth. The meat is so tender that it falls off the bone. The silky white tablecloth against my skin is fragile and smooth to the touch, giving me a sense of comfort and relaxation. As I indulge in my meal, the waitress comes by to check on us. This restaurant is a family favourite because of the excellent service and always amazing food. The meals are reasonably priced, from $17.00 to $25.00. We enjoy celebrating birthdays and family get togethers there. The warm and pleasant ambience this restaurant brings, together with the mouth-watering Greek food creates the perfect gathering place for friends and family.  I will never forget the freshly cooked meals, and I will continue to come back for more.

 

Volcano Blog Post

Mauna Loa 

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Olegyout. “Fantastically Beautiful Eruption of the Mauna Loa Volcano, Hawaii. 1940 – 1984.” YouTube. YouTube, 13 June 2015. Web. 19 Jan. 2017.

Mauna Loa is the world’s largest shield volcano located on the Big Island of Hawaii. Shield volcanoes are the largest volcanoes that form over hot spots and are less explosive than composite volcanoes. They have shallow slope sides and are formed by lava flows of viscosity, meaning the lava flows easily. The magma comes to the surface as fast-flowing lava. The lava travels farther than other types of lava and this type of magma creates the softer sides and steady build-up of the volcano. The reason is because this lava is made of basalt which is very fluid lava when erupted. What causes it to erupt is when water gets into the vent, it becomes explosive, resulting in an eruption of splattering liquid lava.

 

Relations and Functions

These past few days, I have learned how to determine what is the independent and dependent variable in a relation. I have also learned how to express an equation using table of values, ordered pairs, mapping diagram and graphs and how to state the domain and range.

To determine which is the independent variable and dependent variable, you must find out which is the input values and which are the output values.

Table of values always has the input values on the left side column and the output values are on the right side column. This means that the input values/numbers is the independent variables and the output values is the dependent variables. This goes the same for ordered pairs. The first number is the independent variable and the second number is the dependent variable.  When looking at a graph, the x axis is the input values and the y axis is the output values.

When given an equation, at times you will have to find out what is x and y to be able to represent it in a table of values, a graph, or mapping diagrams.

For example, if you are given x^2-6 = y

If given the value of x and you are trying to find y,  you must simply replace x with the input values.

Input values given: {-4, -3, -2, -1, 0, 1, 2, 3, 4}

(-4)^2-6 = y

= 16-6 = 10

10 is one of the output values so when writing the ordered pair it would have x first then y second:

(-4, 10)

Do the same of each input value and write them in the table of values.

If given the value of y and you must find the value of x,  you must get x by itself:

Output values: {-5, -3, 0, 2, 4, 6}

y = -x-2

-3 = -x-2

Add two to cancel out the two and add two to the -3 which gives you -1.

-1 = -x

Divide the -x by -1 to get x and divide -1 with -1 which gives you 1.

1 = x

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Domain and Range

Domain is the set of all the possible values that’s used for the input of the independent variable and the range is the possible values used for the output of the dependent variables. When writing them, you must place them in ascending order meaning smallest to biggest. To find the domain, you must first look for the input values which is the numbers on the x axis. For range, it’s the output values on the y axis.

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The hardest part so far of this lesson is finding the domain and range. I still struggle when I’m given diagrams that isn’t linear (meaning it’s a straight line) such as diagrams that is curved or has multiple lines instead of one straight line.

 

Transgenic Animals

First, what are transgenic animals? Transgenic animals are when their genome, which is responsible for human characteristics, has been deliberately altered by a gene or group of genes from another species or breed.

Transgenic animals are produced by numerous methods. However the three principal methods are DNA microinjection, Retrovirus-Mediated gene transfer, and Embryonic stem cell-mediated gene transfer. The most common is through DNA microinjection also known as physical transfection. This is the process of taking the DNA of a different or the same species and injecting it into the pro-nucleus of a fertilized ovum. Inserting the DNA is random but there is a high probability that the gene that’s introduced will not insert into a site on the host DNA that will permit its expression. This method has a major advantage as it is applicable to wide varieties. This is only one of the three principal methods of creating transgenic animals. Retrovirus-Mediated gene transfer involves retroviruses used as vectors, an organism that transmits a disease from one animal, to transfer genetic material into the host cell. A retrovirus is a virus that carries its genetic information in the form of RNA instead of DNA. Offspring gained from this method result in a chimera, an organism consisting of tissues or parts of genetic constitution. Embryonic stem cell-mediated gene transfer involves the isolation of totipotent stem cells (stem cells that can develop into any type of specialized cell) from embryos. The desired gene is inserted into these cells containing the desired DNA and are incorporated into the host’s embryo, resulting in a chimeric animal.

Here is an example of how a transgenic animal is produced using the gene of a cow:

http://people.ucalgary.ca/~browder/transgenic.html

Transgenic animals are best used as models in biomedical research for the research of human diseases. This allows them to understand the gene function in the context of disease susceptibility, progression and used to determine responses to a therapeutic intervention. Ninety-five percent of transgenic animals that are tested are genetically modified rodents, mainly mice. They have been genetically modified to naturally produce human antibodies for use as therapeutics. There are also transgenic farm animals that produce large quantities of complex human proteins for the treatment of human disease.

Transgenic animals can be used to cure diseases such as diabetes. The method used is called transplantation which involves the process of taking the cells in the animal that produce insulin, which is made from beta cells in the pancreas and transplanting it to the diabetes patients so they won’t have to inject the insulin. Transplantation is a very difficult process without having a whole body. Transplantation is the body of the Islet of Langerhans which are bundles of cells that contain and introduce the insulin producing cells. When you transplant them, you need to get a new blood supply and a new nerve supply which is why it would be a difficult process without an animal. Although, this method has worked, it can only be used for a few number of people as it is risky. Patients will need to go on immuno suppression drugs so that’s why most just take insulin instead.

Transgenic animals can keep infants healthy by the process of transgenesis, modifying the genes of the parent animal that can produce an offspring with qualities that humans can use. Scientists have discovered how cows can produce milk with casein, a type of protein used for cheese manufacturing by modifying the cow. These cows can also produce lactoferrin (a protein present in milk and other secretions, with bactericidal and iron-binding properties), which can be found in the immune system. This can be used as an additive to infant formula.

http://www.animalresearch.info/en/medical-advances/diseases-research/diabetes/

http://www.whatisbiotechnology.org/science/transgenic

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Transgenic cows like this one produce a natural protein in their milk that kills the bacteria that cause animal mastitis which is inflammation of the mammary gland in the breast or udder.

Transgenic animals have the potential to improve human welfare in agriculture, medicine and industry. Agriculture was time-consuming for farmers but now that the molecular biology was made, it was easy to develop traits in animals in a shorter period and with more precision which is an easy way for farmers to increase yields. The quality of the products that the animals produce has also improved and the animals are healthier. For example, transgenic chickens produce eggs that have more protein added to generate antibodies to fight cancer and some have less cholesterol. The cows milk will produce more cheese efficiently and animals who have less fat are said to be healthier. Transgenic animals can also be organ donors in the future. Pigs have organs like humans in size and are readily available but their tissues age must faster. Proponents say that there will be a time where animal organs can be used on people who are waiting for donors. This would help organ donors who don’t have to be on a wait list and the process would be much quicker and efficient. Toxicity-sensitive transgenic animals have also been produced for chemical-safety testing. They have been engineered to produced a wide variety of proteins which can then produce enzymes which can speed up industrial chemical reactions.

http://www.actionbioscience.org/biotechnology/margawati.html

http://connectusfund.org/9-biggest-pros-and-cons-of-transgenic-animals

https://www.bio.org/articles/genetically-engineered-animals-frequently-asked-questions

In this picture, a mouse grew an ear on its back which can be cut off and donated to someone who needs an ear.

In conclusion, transgenic animals plays a critical role in developing and discovering new drugs for diseases. This enables scientists to study the function of specific genes which enhances the study of the disease biology and facilitates the development of the drug to target the specific disease.

 

 

Multiplying Polynomials

This week in math class I have learned how to FOIL when multiplying polynomials as well as using an area diagram.

FOIL is a distributive technique when multiplying polynomials together.

F: First term in each bracket  (a+b)(c+d)   first term: a \cdot c

O: outside terms        (a+b)(c+d)    Outside term: a \cdot d

I: inside terms        (a+b)(c+d)     Inside term: b \cdot c

L: last term in each bracket        (a+b)(c+d)   Last term: b \cdot d

Example:

(a^2+8)(a^2-8)

F: First term in each bracket

(a^2)(a^2)=a^4

You are taking a^2 and multiplying it with the other a^2 in the other bracket which will then give you a^4 because you add the exponents when the bases are the same during multiplication.

I: Inside terms

(a^2)(-8)=-8a^2

Make sure to multiply the first term with the other term as well, everything that’s inside the other bracket, so in this case, a^2 will be multiplied with (-8) which will be -8a^2.

You are now left with a^4-8a^2.

O: Outside terms

Now you have multiplied the first term with everything in the other bracket and the inside term with the other term, you now need to do the same for the outside term. In this case, you now need to multiply 8 with a^2 which will give you 8a^2.

(8)(a^2)=8a^2

L: Last terms

Then you multiply 8 with the second term in the other bracket.

8(-8) = -64

You now put all the terms together in descending order by the exponents and collect like terms if needed.

a^4-8a^2+8a^2-64

-8a^2 and +8a^2 cancel out so you are now left with:

a^4-64

This is Foiling but I learned a quicker technique that you can use depending on each equation.

Example: (x+7)^2

Instead of expanding the equation then simplifying, you just need to square x = x^2, then multiply x with +7 and double it = 7x \cdot 2 = 14x, then square the last digit which is 7 = 7^2 = 49.

= x^2+14x+49

Although this way is quicker, it doesn’t use the same method for every equation. This is just a technique you can use when you are given a polynomial that has an exponent instead of expanding the equation.

The hardest part of this lesson was when I had to find the area of a rectangle/square when it had empty areas, so you had to find out the angles by subtracting then multiplying and other steps which was a little confusing but I managed to understand it.