Stereotypes and different cultures

One thing I am proud of on my essay is that I really tried to incorporate different quotes, they may have not been relevant quotes at times, but I am proud that I tried my best to incorporate them. One thing I want to work on is having better descriptive words, because when you use words that pop and are euphonic, I feel it adds a lot to the story. One more thing that I want to improve on for grade 12 is the flow of my essays because without good flow the story will not make sense/ will not sound good. I’ve noticed that in some of my recent writing assignments you have said I need to improve on the flow in some sections, so I will definitely try and fix that for my narrative essay!

 

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