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Small Actions, Big Differences


2 Things I did Well

  1. I added quotes that were relevant and helped support my argument. I selected the right quotes and integrated them at appropriate times.
  2. My essay was very organized and well-structured. Ideas were separated and the format of the essay was correct.

 2 Things I Want to Improve

  1. I did have a lot of vagueness, “Deadwood” and repetition that I would like to cut out next time.
  2. I would like to add some more creativity to my introduction, hook, and conclusion. I definitely need to add a more interesting hook to make it more attention-grabbing.

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