Proud of: I am happy about the MLA formatting good usage of transition words Improve on: on making my writing more concise checking for commas when editing
Racism has had so many effects on humanity. For example, in Indian Horse, Saul was called names, they were made fun of, but all he did was keep quiet. That anger grew and grew and grew in him just like a tumour. It exploded when her couldn’t’ take it any longer. The poison took […]
I did well on explaining the situation. I need to improve making my writing more concise.
Meaning: Be strong and patient and don’t waste your time on someone who doesn’t care about you. Theme Statement: In order to gain something, one must also sacrifice things to achieve their goal.
The point of view I used is objective: The police knocked on the door. The owner opened the door and greeted the annoyed and tired police officers. The police explained to the owner that they had been told that the neighbors had heard a shriek. The owner told the police that the scream the neighbors […]
SOURCE – THE WATCH In the short story, “The Watch” by Elie Wiesel, the author describes his life after the Holocaust, when he went back to his home. Elie was born in Sighet, Romania in 1928 and forcefully taken to a concentration camp in Germany when he was fifteen years old. Before they left for […]
This Chopan Can Certainly Chop Some Delicious Food Afghan Chopan is a restaurant that introduces you to Afghan culture and establish many unforgettable memories. The moment you enter, you are introduced into a whole new world as the courteous servers greet you inside and find you a place to dine. The atmosphere has a very […]
Adapted from the poem by Martin Niemoller “First They Came for the Jews” in response to the poem “Danger of Silence” First they came for the black slaves and I did not speak out because I was not a black slave Then they came for the Syrian Refugees and I did not speak […]
I think that the best way one could fight injustice is by standing up for themselves. However sometimes people/citizens can’t stand up for themselves if what they want is from the government or someone that is more powerful. For example when that Muslim minority in Myanmar stood up for themselves, the military slaughtered and burned […]