Proud of: I am happy about the MLA formatting good usage of transition words Improve on: on making my writing more concise checking for commas when editing
Racism has had so many effects on humanity. For example, in Indian Horse, Saul was called names, they were made fun of, but all he did was keep quiet. That anger grew and grew and grew in him just like a tumour. It exploded when her couldn’t’ take it any longer. The poison took […]
I did well on explaining the situation. I need to improve making my writing more concise.
Meaning: Be strong and patient and don’t waste your time on someone who doesn’t care about you. Theme Statement: In order to gain something, one must also sacrifice things to achieve their goal.
The point of view I used is objective: The police knocked on the door. The owner opened the door and greeted the annoyed and tired police officers. The police explained to the owner that they had been told that the neighbors had heard a shriek. The owner told the police that the scream the neighbors […]