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What effect did the residential school have on the main characters in Indian Horse by Richard Wagamese and Sugar Falls by David Alexander Robertson-1h99v41

Two things that I did well on essay are that I found a lot of evidences and explained well, and that I used the right transition words.

Two thing that I did not do well were that my words were strong enough to express and explain the two books, and that i put too much ideas on.

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