My First and Last Trip to Fright Night

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The two things that I thought I had done well at were both the use of descriptive words, making the writing more enjoyable to read and comprehend. As well using my time to write wisely, and completing on time.

The two things that I need to work on for next time would be both understanding when to use semi colons, as well as making to story flow better.