Disobeying for a Greater Good

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Two things that I thought I did particularly well on were both using multiple sources to further my evidence and argument, as well as create a thesis sentence that is strong, and follows the correct format.

Two things that I thought I did not do to well were both my lack of proofreading which led to various grammatical mistakes and awkward sentences. As well as a lack of supporting detail for some arguments, and not providing how it counters the other side of the debate. I will make sure to proof read my work and definitely remember to take these into account the next time I write a formal essay.