Boy Dances with Ballerina, Both Shot Dead
Noah Woodward
This weekend, Harrison Bergeron, after ripping off his handicaps, went up with a ballerina and started dancing and both ended up being shot and killed.
Harrison Bergeron was the one that was shot and killed after escaping from jail. He showed up on the live telecast he ripped off his handicap guards and goes up to the ballerina and ends up dancing with the ballerina and they both were shot and killed while dancing together.
Thank you for posting your practice/attempt of turning a short story into a newspaper article. The following are my suggestions based on your post:
– Headline and byline are completed properly
– The lead paragraph answers all of the relevant questions with appropriate information
– Explanation and additional information could be expanded upon
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask!
Mr. Barazzuol
English Teacher