My Independence Day Write up

For next time I want to improve on my short sentences, because I think I got a little carried away, I just like them a lot, so I used them a lot.  Another skill I hope to improve in is my dialogue, like I didn’t know you don’t capitalize the next word after you’re done the dialogue.  Although I am very proud of the humour/sarcasm I used at some parts, because after all Im not a sad person I don’t like writing about things that are sad.  Im also proud of my attempt to use literary devices like repetition, alliteration, metaphor and simile and comparison.


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