Narrative Essay Corrections | Core-Competencies-Self Assessment

Here is my narrative corrections and Spoken Word Self-Assessment.

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Narrative Essay Final – Near Death Experience 1-2mmzdk9

Reflection for Narrative Essay :

I’m so proud of my narrative essay because I truly to share my story experience to anyone. Besides that, it taught me how to organize my idea on paper like brainstorm first and help my thinking skills more stronger.

Paragraph Corrections – How does bullying affect our life ?

How does bullying affect our life ?

The Thirteen Reasons Why Tv shows, which is based on the best-selling books by Jay Asher tells the story about teenager Clay… He returns home from school to find a mysterious box with his name on it lying on his porch. Inside, he discovers a group of cassette tapes recorded by Hannah Baker, his classmate and crush who tragically committed suicide two weeks earlier. On the tape, Hannah unfolds an emotional audio diary, detailing the thirteen reasons why she decided to end her life. Through Hannah and Clay’s dual narratives, Thirteen Reasons Why weaves an intricate and heartrending story of confusion and desperation about Hannah Baker who was bullied by friends in school. She was “slut-shaming with girls” to push the young girl to darkness depressed. Humans can be barbaric, irresponsible about their acts; we need to speak up and against “school-violence” and the heedless attitude of people around to survive the people get out of the deep darkness. This book, also a Tv series how bully affects our life. Sometimes the smallest gesture of ignorance and apathy can push someone to become desperate and give up of hope to alive.

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