Overall, I am happy with my essay because I did the best that I believe I could have.
One thing I will watch out for the next time I am writing an essay with quotes will be to correctly put them into the text. Next time I will be sure that I completely understand how.
Secondly, to improve in the future I would go back and read the rubric and edit my essay more before handing it in because I think re-reading a few things could help save my mark in the end by providing more thorough and thoughtful writing.
Lastly, one thing that I am proud of with this persuasive essay was my organization and arguments which overall I put the most effort into from the beginning.