Below is a reflection on my Spoken Word and a recording of our performance:
For this essay, I feel that I did poorly on understanding the connection between my thesis and the layout of my essay. I was unable to write a thesis statement that was successful in relaying the problem I was trying to address. In the end, I was able to fix my errors but wish I had had more time to understand how to write the thesis properly but was able to connect my two sources successfully. I feel that this was not my best work due to my thesis again not being the spine of the structure for my essay but I was happy with the connections I made throughout my compare and contrast in my third body paragraph and throughout the two block paragraphs as well.