June 11

DOAS Monologues

Today in class we were tasked with “entering the minds” of the people in the play “Death Of A Salesman” and writing a monologue on their behalf. So that’s exactly what I’ve done, I chose to write on behalf of Biff, the character I’ve been “acting” out in front of the class. I hope it’s a decent monologue and I hope you enjoy. Feel free to leave tips or comments in the comment section.

 

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April 30

“Father and Son” Plot Point Photos

This project is supposed to show the plot points of a short story called “Father and Son”.  supposed to take 8 quotes, that show examples of the different points of the plot. Like a quote from the story for Rising action, or for falling action, etc.  After that’s done, one would need to take pictures that reflect the quote and insert them into the post for each quote.

1.Exposition

Quote: “Because I do not sleep well I hear my father rising to go to work. I know that in a few minutes he will come in to look at me sleeping. He will want to check I cam home last night. He will stand in his bare feet, his shoes and socks in his hand, looking at me. I will sleep for him” (MacLaverty 165).

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Explanation: This quote fits the position picked for it because it introduces the reader to the two main characters of the book, the father and the son. It shows that the two don’t talk, because the son didn’t tell the father he was home and it shows that the father watches him sleep.

2.Initiating Incident

Quote: “My son is breaking my heart. It is already broken… If I leave him alone he will break my heart anyway. I must speak to him…

‘What do you be doing out to this time?’

‘Not again’

‘Answer me.’

‘Talking.’

‘Who with?’

‘Friends, just go to bed, Da, will you?’

‘What do you talk about?’

‘Nothing much.’

‘Talk to me, son'” (MacLaverty 166).

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Explanation: This quote shows one that the father’s had his heart broken before, but his son is still able to break his heart. It fits this plot point fairly well, showing what seems like a point for which the father to improve his relationship with the boy.

3.Rising Action

Quote: “I pulled you away from death once and now you will not talk to me. I want to know if you are in danger again” (MacLaverty 166).

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Explanation: This quote show that the father had to save the sons life once already and would prefer to not have to. It shows that through thick and thin the father will always care about his son, no matter how much they distance. This fits rising action as it’s one of the actions that furthers the conflict and approaches the climax.

4.Rising Action

Quote: “Your hands shake in the morning, Da, because you are a coward” (MacLaverty 167).

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Explanation: This quote shows what the son thinks of the father, and how he treats him. It furthers the conflict because it shows how the son is further hating the father.

5.Rising Action

Quote: “The door swings open and he pushes a hand gun beneath the pillow” (MacLaverty 169).

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Explanation: This quote is the last rising action quote before the climax. It shows that the son plans to escalate things soon. It foreshadows that something pretty bad is about to happen.

6.Climax

Quote: “There is a bang. A dish-cloth drops from my hand and I run to the kitchen door” (MacLaverty 169).

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Explanation: This quote fits the climax because it depicts a gun shot going off. The father realizing that a gun shot went off at his front door, rushes to see what happened. Worrying either that his son was shot, or his son shot someone.

7.Falling Action

Quote: “My son is lying on the floor, his head on the bottom stair, his feet on the threshold” (MacLaverty 169).

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Explanation: The father reaching the front door sees his son lying down on the floor. Wanting to believe that his son is only resting, and not dead, he forces himself to believe that he’s just lying there.

8.Denouement

Quote: “My son, let me put my arms around you” (MacLaverty 169).

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Explanation: The father finally realizing that the son is dead, and finally accepting it. Puts his arms around his son and holds his lifeless body. this fits perfectly in the Denouement, it wraps up the conflict by killing off one of the people within the conflict. Although it starts a new conflict having the father alone and not knowing who killed his son.

April 9

Lord Of The Flies – Island Description

The Platform:

“Here the beach was interrupted abruptly by the square motif of the landscape; a great platform of pink granite thrust up uncompromisingly through forest and terrace and sand and lagoon to make a raised jetty four feet high. The top of this was covered with a thin layer of soil and coarse grass and shaded with young palm trees. There was not enough soil for them to grow to any height and when they reached perhaps twenty feet they fell and dried, forming a criss-cross pattern of trunks, very convenient to sit on. The palms that still stood made a green roof, covered on the underside with a quivering tangle of reflections from the lagoon” (Golding 13).

The Shore:

“The shore was fledged with palm trees. These stood or leaned or reclined against the light and their green feathers were a hundred feet up in the air. The ground beneath them was a bank covered with coarse grass, torn everywhere by the upheavals of fallen trees, scattered with decaying coconuts and palm saplings. Behind this was the darkness of the forest proper and the open space of the scar. Ralph stood, one hand against a grey trunk, and screwed up his eyes against the shimmering water. Out there, perhaps a mile away, the white surf flinked on a coral reef, and beyond that the open sea was dark blue. Within the irregular arc of coral the lagoon was still as a mountain lake—blue of all shades and shadowy green and purple. The beach between the palm terrace and the water was a thin stick, endless apparently, for to Ralph’s left the perspectives of palm and beach and water drew to a point at infinity; and always, almost visible, was the heat” (Golding 4).

The Lagoon:

“Within the irregular arc of coral the lagoon was still as a mountain lake—blue of all shades and shadowy green and purple” (Golding 10).

The Beach:

“The beach between the palm terrace and the water was a thin stick, endless apparently, for to Ralph’s left the perspectives of palm and beach and water drew to a point at infinity; and always, almost visible, was the heat” (Golding 10).

“The beach near the bathing pool was dotted with groups of boys waiting for the assembly. They made way for him silently, conscious of his grim mood and the fault at the fire. The place of assembly in which he stood was roughly a triangle; but irregular and sketchy, like everything they made. First there was the log on which he himself sat; a dead tree that must have been quite exceptionally big for the platform. Perhaps one of those legendary storms of the Pacific had shifted it here. This palm trunk lay parallel to the beach, so that when Ralph sat he faced the island but to the boys was a darkish figure against the shimmer of the lagoon. The two sides of the triangle of which the log was base were less evenly defined. On the right was a log polished by restless seats along the top, but not so large as the chief’s and not so comfortable. On the left were four small logs, one of them–the farthest– lamentably springy” (Golding 82).

The Cave:

“He led the way over the rocks, inspected a sort of half-cave… There was indeed a long green smudge halfway up the rock… Side by side they scaled the last height to where the diminishing pile was crowned by the last broken rock… A hundred feet below them was the narrow causeway, then the stony ground, then the grass dotted with heads, and behind that the forest” (Golding 115-116).

The Coral Reef:

“The coral was scribbled in the sea as though a flowing, chalk line but tired before it had finished. Inside was peacock water, rocks and weed showing as in an aquarium; outside was the dark blue of the sea” (Golding 26).

The Island:

“It was roughly boat shaped; humped near this end with behind them the jumbled descent to the shore. On either side rocks, cliffs, tree-tp[s and a steep slope; forward there, the length of the boat, a tamer descent, tree-clad with hints of pink: and then the jungly flat of the island, dense green, but drawn at the end to a pink tail. There, where the island petered out in the water, was another island; a rock, almost detached, standing like a fort, facing them across the green with one bold, pink bastion” (Golding 26).

The Scar:

Beyond falls and cliffs there was a gash visible in the trees; there were the splintered trunks and then the drag, leaving only a fringe of palm between the scar and the sea” (Golding 22).

The Bathing Pool:

The beach near the bathing pool was dotted with groups of boys waiting for the assembly” (Golding 82).

March 5

Walter Mitty Daydream Six

He took one last drag on his cigarette and snapped it away. Then with that faint, fleeting smile playing about his lips, he faced the firing squad; erect and motionless, proud and disdainful, Walter Mitty the Undefeated, inscrutable to the last, was about to be defeated at last. At least, that’s what he wanted them to think. Walter had an ace up his sleeve and was just getting ready to use it. As the firing squads were getting ready to fire, a bomb went off behind them. “Ah, right on time!” Exclaimed Walter, as his rebel friends who set the bomb off came through the newly made hole in the wall. The firing squad was surrounded by rebels and gave up immediately, Walter rakishly strut past them as he made his way to his brand-new escape route. He took his first step of freedom in two years…

 

WALTER WATCH WHERE YOU’RE GOING,” Exclaimed Walter’s wife, as Walter had started to walk out into the street. A car zoomed past only a foot in front of Walter, as he jumped back out of fright. “You really should be more careful Walter, I don’t know how insolent you would have to be to walk out into the street like that. Now let’s keep going, we still need to pick up some Soda for tonight’s dinner,” said Mrs. Mitty. “Yea, yea. I must’ve just not been looking where I was heading, I’ll work on that,” said Mitty in rebuttal. The two of them made their way to the local supermarket to buy some soda. On the way they passed a movie theater, which was showing a movie about a cowboy in the wild west. “Wouldn’t it be cool to be a sheriff back then?” Walter asked his Wife, “I’m sure it would, now where is that supermarket?” She said dismissively…

 

                  Walter road through the desert on his horse, Chestnut, the fastest mare in the west. He was after Jesse James and the whole gang, they were robbing a train they had stopped right before his eyes. He caught up to the train and saw Jesse James on the top of the train carrying two bags filled to the brim with crisp green bills, one in each hand. “Why don’t you hop down from there and we can fit you for a pair of cuffs. How ‘bout it?”  said Walter Mitty confidently tapping his Volcanic Colt .44-41

strapped to his belt.  Jesse immediately dropped the bags and went for his gun. Luckily, Mitty was one of the fastest guns in the west. Mitty shot the gun out of Jesse’s hand and motioned for him to get down off the train. Jesse complied being scared enough for his life already. Unfortunately for Mitty, he forgot about the rest of the gang. In his moment of triumph he was too caught up to realize they had already surrounded him with their guns drawn. Mitty, the fastest gun in the west, had been caught…

 

February 15

Character Sketch “Two Fishermen”

This character sketch is on the character Michael Foster, this is more or less, my opinion on what he looks like (^As seen above)and who he is as a character, well, more just what I found in the story, not my actual opinion. From what I’ve seen throughout the short story, Michael Foster seems to be a docile, greedy, and cowardly man. Michael is a reporter for the town paper, who wants to eventually leave the small town for a much bigger city. One day Michael comes across the one story he thinks would be able to give him the push he needs to leave this small town. The town has a man how in self defence murdered a man, although it was in self defence, he is sentenced to death, and an executioner is brought to town. Michael sees this as an opportunity and attempts to talk and get to know the executioner, using him to further his own career. He finds out that this man actually is a human being and has a family and has feelings, he ended up liking the guy and thinking he was pretty great. Then came the day of the hanging, after the hanging the hangman was supposed to leave in a car, but for some reason the car left without him, leaving him to face a mob of people all pelting rocks and other stuff at him, this was the moment where Michael could’ve helped this poor man, but instead, he cowered in the crowd and didn’t do a thing. This was a cowardly act, and earlier he used him to further his own career, the greedy aspect. I believe Daniel Radcliff would do a pretty good job at playing this character.

February 8

Capital Punishment in “Two Fishermen”

Capital Punishment, what is it? Well Capital punishment is more or less, the death sentence. Basically when someone commits a really serious crime, they kill them. In Canada, in the early days, we had Capital Punishment as well, but only for premeditated murder and murder of an on duty law man. Luckily, in Canada, we got rid of Capital Punishment in 1976, and we also took it away from the Canadian National Defence Act in 1988. Now let’s get into Capital Punishment in the short story “Two Fishermen”. In this short story a man named Thomas Delany is supposed to be hanged for protecting his wife from a man who was molesting her named, Mathew Rinehart. If this were to have happened in Canada it would’ve had to happen before the year 1976 (Because that’s the year we abolished Capital Punishment), and it happened in the middle of the town for all people to see, so it most likely happened closer to 1865, (Because that’s when we originally introduced Capital Punishment) I’m thinking early 1900’s.

Now let’s move onto why Thomas Delany should not have been hanged like he was. Now Thomas Delany did commit a murder, but it was in the Defence of his wife, who was at the time being sexually assaulted, which I might add would have gotten Mathew Rinehart the death penalty for his actions anyway. Not only that, but Thomas Delany didn’t plan on committing this crime, so it wasn’t premeditated, it was in self defence, as Mathew Rinehart had also started to beat up Thomas for attempting to stop him from what he was doing. In my opinion Thomas shouldn’t have gotten any penalty, because it was self defence and he was defending his wife.