Life to the Fullest
By Markus Jack
Imagine living a boring life,
Never getting married and having no husband or wife.
Waking up and doing the same thing every day,
All humanity the same like a group of cows trying to find some hay.
Imagine a world where you do nothing and then die,
Just like laying in the sun and your skin starts to fry.
Life is a roller-coaster bumpy and rough,
Thump, thump is your beating heart when life gets too tough.
Make more out of your life and don’t sit here and sob,
Instead motivate yourself to go get a meaningful job.
Life is too short to waste any precious time,
It is important to be present and live in the moment all the time.
If we reach out our hand,
To protect all of our land.
We can make this world a better place,
Demonstrating inclusiveness and kindness no matter of anyone’s race.
Humanity has so much potential to be great,
It is time to go explore the world and put a stamp on what you create.
Dig deep into your sole is where you need to start,
Follow your hopes and dreams that are inside your heart.
Markus Jack
Part B: Mini Composition of Life To The Fullest
As the saying goes, “Live life to the fullest!”, always live each day as if it were your last. That is the message that should be broadcasted worldwide. In the poem “Life to the Fullest” by Markus Jack, he uses descriptive language, figurative devices, sound devices, and tone throughout, to portray that message.
As said in the poem, “All of humanity the same like a group of cows trying to find some hay”, he uses a simile to compare the human race to a group of cows, further proving his point that in society, we continue to “follow the leader” instead of taking our own path. The author also uses imagery in that line giving us a direct idea and image of what he means. Throughout the poem, especially in that line, his figurative language really gives a good idea of the tone. It’s almost as if the author is motivating you to do more for yourself while you are reading. In these lines “Imagine living a boring life, Getting up doing the same thing every day” Markus demonstrates imagery.
Markus uses many kinds of figurative devices in his poem. He uses a metaphor to compare two things with similar qualities without using like or as. Markus compares life to a rollercoaster (“Life is a roller-coaster bumpy and rough”). He uses personification to give human qualities by saying that the person is not actually digging with a shovel into their sole (“Dig deep into your sole is where you need to start”) or the person is not really putting a stamp on the world (“It is time to go explore the world an put a stamp on what you create”). Markus uses metonymy to make a concept be referred to by a name of something closely associated with the concept. When Markus says “If we reach out our hand” he is meaning helping out someone.
Markus uses some sound devices in his poem. The author uses an onomatopoeia when he uses the words thump, thump to phonetically mimic the sound of a heart beating (“Thump, thump is your beating heart when life gets to tough.”). Markus uses assonance when he used repetition of the same vowel sound (i) in a line in his poem (“Imagine living a boring life.”). The author uses repetition by using the word “life” multiple times throughout his poem.
Markus crates tone and attitude throughout his poem. He uses a hyperbole when he makes an extreme exaggeration statement which is not meant to be taken literally. The skin is not actually frying (“Just like lying in the sun and your skin starts to fry.”).
In these lines, “Humanity has so much potential to be great. It is time to go explore the world and put a stamp on what you create”, it really relates to the overall theme of the poem. It’s basically saying, if life isn’t infinite, why do we continue to waste our lives? Markus Jack used descriptive language, figurative devices, sound devices, and tone throughout his poem to help express a positive outlook on life and always live life to the fullest with no regrets.
What Can a Poem do?
By Darius V. Daughtry
The poem “What Can a Poem do?” is an open poetry written by Darius V. Daughtry. He shows a lot of different kinds of literal language in this poem. He starts the poem off by saying what a poem can and can’t do but the poem is called, “What a Poem can do?” not can’t do. He continues to talk about how a poem won’t save you physically like getting shot or getting blown up. This poem shows a lot of imagery. When he says, “a poem can’t make you less woman or less poor or less black”, he is saying that a poem can’t make things change you. When I heard this part of the poem it immediately put an image in my head about the BLM movement that is going on right now. I thought how a poem can’t make everyone equal but reading poetry can help a wounded soul. Another piece of imagery I saw in the poem is “a poem cannot turn back times hand, erase mistakes made, or cut, copy, paste memories’, a poem cannot delete history’s horrors”. When I heard these lines of imagery, I immediately thought off mistakes I have made in the past and it’s how you overcome them and persevere through even if you know you messed up. I also thought about how a poem cannot go back in time or go in the future. I cannot fix mistakes in the past, but it can help benefit myself in the future by not making those mistakes anymore. The theme in the poem is a lesson about life. A poem may not be able to save you physically but can help save you mentally. It’s about overcoming obstacles that get into your way and always pushing yourself to be the best person you can possibly be. I chose this poem because this is the poem, I understood the most and felt the most connected to. I struggle with not being able to let things go. For example, when I play hockey and make a mistake which leads to them to scoring, I must have a short memory and let it go. If I do bad on a test, I must let things go and move on and make sure I am more prepared for the next obstacle in my way. Every time I have something important, I always think of this curtain quote. “It’s not the size of the dog in the fight, it’s the size of the fight in the dog”. Saying this over a couple times helps calm me down and lets me know I can only do what I can control.