Two things I did well:
- Firstly, I believe that I had good information to my topic that helped my topic.
- Secondly, I believe that I wrote in good detail about each point helping with showing my facts.
Two things I did not do well:
- Firstly I believe my wording in some cases were not very well chosen because it made some sentences sound weird and in some cases not understand.
- Secondly, I wish that in some cases I put fewer words into an explanation because in some cases my explanations are condensed and in others, the explanation is very long.