Two things I did well were my introduction and my thesis, two things I could improve on were integrating my quotes better and my spelling errors.
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Death from a spider and how not to avoid it-1vg99at reflection: I feel like in this narrative essay I did well in adding the fear of the event into the memory of what happened, I could have definitely added more detail into it.
Meaning of the poem: Everyone can grow from their mistakes but that doesn’t mean you have to be dragged down from it, instead it will only make you build strength and make you stronger. Theme: One may try to drag us down but one shouldn’t let that effect them instead one should build strength from […]
the point of view I used was limited omniscient The police officer knocked on the door with suspicion. When someone answered the door the police officer was told by the man living in the house that the noise he heard was from himself from a nightmare. The police officer and his fellow officers entered […]
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adapted from the poem by Martin Niemmoler “first they came for the jews” in response to the poem “danger of silence” First they came for the African Americans , and I did not speak out— Because I was not an African American. Then they came for the refugees, and I did not speak out— Because […]
Where does one find beauty in the face of extreme conflict? I think that you can find beauty in extreme conflict through helping others in a time of need and that the beauty is not a physical appearance of a human or the earth but on how others can help each other and come forgiving and […]