I chose this image because it represents the narrative essay. The colours are cold and warm, demonstrating the sad and happy emotions, and moments, that surround me. The reason why they’re two people, who seem to be dancing down the walkway, represents my head and heart.
What I did well in this essay was the style of writing and how I structured the essay. The two things I would improve are the grammar and my sentence fluency.
Artist: Unknown
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Nice work, Maebel.