Essay corrections
Good
I think I did very well at choosing 2 sources I was confident in information wise. I had watched and studied them multiple times before doing the essay.
Not so good
Try to start earlier so I do more information and I’m not on a tight deadline where I am forcing my ideas instead of taking time to think about them.
Not so good 2
Try to actually press the send button on my E-mail so I don’t get a 5% reduction.
https://www.newyorker.com/culture/cultural-comment/hasan-minhajs-new-brown-america
https://www.thestar.com/entertainment/television/2016/10/09/kims-convenience-mines-korean-grocery-store-for-laughs.html
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