Essay corrections – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Essay corrections

Good

I think I did very well at choosing 2 sources I was confident in information wise.  I had watched and studied them multiple times before doing the essay.

Not so good

Try to start earlier so I do more information and I’m not on a tight deadline where I am forcing my ideas instead of taking time to think about them.

Not so good 2

Try to actually press the send button on my E-mail so I don’t get a 5% reduction.

https://www.newyorker.com/culture/cultural-comment/hasan-minhajs-new-brown-america

https://www.thestar.com/entertainment/television/2016/10/09/kims-convenience-mines-korean-grocery-store-for-laughs.html

 

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