Totem question – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Posted on December 6, 2018 by lukam2016 under English 11, Grade 11

Totem question

The fact they took their land and then proceeded to kill a lot of them while trying to destroy their culture is completely immoral. The F.N people today still show effects of trauma and those effects are the result of the behavior by the Canadian government and racist people. Some examples of these effects are drinking habits, depression, high rates of suicide, etc. Canadians need to realize the past and make a conscious effort to help fix what some bad people have started.

Persuasive essay corrections – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Posted on December 5, 2018 by lukam2016 under Uncategorized

Reflection

I could have improved on…

Going deeper and providing much more argument. It was there, but it wasn’t enough.
Providing more research – using more evidence and sources helps my ideas to be more convincing and more trusted by others who would potentially oppose it in the first place.

I did well on…

Keeping it structured – I stuck with the system and it ended up being an essay that was fairly easy to read. All the parts were identifiable by the reader.

The photo included below is Simon from the book “The Lord of the flies” and in my eyes, he represents the one who leads with love in the book.